I wanted to tell
you how much I loved the haiku
and anti-haiku.
my first comment was
poetic and brilliant,
but it would not post.
the second and third
i admit were cheap copies
of the original
those deserved to be
sucked into the nothingness
of the black hole where
my comments seem to
be flying into at warp
speed - condemned to die
and after two days
of this, i realized that
i could tell you here
that i loved your poems,
the brilliant fall out and
into a haiku.
2 weeks ago
4 comments:
And try you did in style! :D
Karen sure is one to inspire isn't she? :P
We should give you more assignments from now on. :D :D
I am speechless, and that just does not happen!
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Glad to see you, Aniket! Yes, she does inspire. :)
Karen - glad you like my post! :) I'll keep trying to comment on your blog, but so far I haven't had any luck.:( Seriously, all my comments disappear as soon as I hit the "post comment" button.
Oh I adore this poem. Words that
scramble around in my mind when
a post of love of a poem becomes
lost.
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