Monday, September 28, 2009

Karen, I really did try....

I wanted to tell
you how much I loved the haiku
and anti-haiku.

my first comment was
poetic and brilliant,
but it would not post.

the second and third
i admit were cheap copies
of the original

those deserved to be
sucked into the nothingness
of the black hole where

my comments seem to
be flying into at warp
speed - condemned to die

and after two days
of this, i realized that
i could tell you here

that i loved your poems,
the brilliant fall out and
into a haiku.

4 comments:

Aniket said...

And try you did in style! :D

Karen sure is one to inspire isn't she? :P

We should give you more assignments from now on. :D :D

Karen said...

I am speechless, and that just does not happen!

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

bluesugarpoet said...

Glad to see you, Aniket! Yes, she does inspire. :)

Karen - glad you like my post! :) I'll keep trying to comment on your blog, but so far I haven't had any luck.:( Seriously, all my comments disappear as soon as I hit the "post comment" button.

Marie said...

Oh I adore this poem. Words that
scramble around in my mind when
a post of love of a poem becomes
lost.